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The 3rd Face

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The Netherlands
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This photo transmits me mixed feelings. The subjects are well caught, I love the sleeping guy with the big headphones and the guy in the back with a meditative stance.
The B&W gives some impact which is good.
In terms of technique, I sense that there is something missing here. The photo in general is not sharp, the framing doesn't help, as the first thing I see is the bright side of the seat and the big black zone in the right. Maybe if this pic had been taken with a zoom lens, it would help.
I like the overall feeling of the photo, but at a first glance, it gives a sense of lack of equilibrium.
This might be exactly the thing you wanted to capture something a bit different from the standards.

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